He Al,
Always good to hear from you Al 🙂 As for your spell, “hope I like it”, I love it!
It’s nearly perfect the way it is, but I do feel its a little overpowered. I would limit its range down to 12 inches and take away the movement penalty.
I’m guessing the effect of the spell lasts for the entire game?
Also, it would be nice to tie it more into the Three Plains’ law. So the tear in reality could show the mortals the veil where there is the black ocean and its lost souls.